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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-06-21 10:34 PM


A life without you I can never imagine
A face like yours can never be forgotten
You've been the crux of my thought for so many years
Suddenly everything falling apart and tears my heart
I've never thought of a time when you'll never be mine
May be I never took into account what you really desired
I feel sorry at times for making a mockery of our sweet friendship
Sometimes I've thought we can go beyond that line
Sometimes I've thought you desired it too but I was wrong
Destiny exposes my lonely soul to the scavenging reality
I'm unsure of life without you in it please guide my soul
Its a cruel twist of fate as we grow
I'll pray in next birth we're united
A life without you is not a life at all
..but a living death but I'll live to dream of you everyday

Sincerely
A_L


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Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-06-22 01:02 AM


well i can really understand how you feel. i lost 2 of my closest friends in one day and it sucked to know that i no longer had my best friend to turn to when i needed something. you poem is beautifully written.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-22 02:04 AM


i to have felt this as Erin knows i lost the love of my life about three years ago. her name was Melissa and she was gunned down by a rivel gang of ours in Jacksonville. and i guess thats why i love this so. thanks for posting it. i loved it as i loved and still love her. and if you wish and only if you wish i'll be posting a poem about her in a few days read it if you like.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
3 posted 2000-06-22 02:58 PM


Please do it Jeremiah ....I feel terrible at the moment..very depressed ..but i'll overcome it finally..
Thanks..
A_L

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-18 09:44 AM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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