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Teen Poetry #3

Destiny

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-21 02:41 PM

Death is not my destiny
  As much as i try
    To hide it
I've been given love
        In
So many special ways
       And
Places throgh my heart
       And
Even with each love stuck
       Dart
I still don't know were
     To start.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2000-06-21 03:19 PM

i know the feelings of this very well. i don't like to admit that people out there care for me either. the last two lines are magnificent.

your style is unique. i like it a lot.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

**AANGELLE**
Junior Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 45

2 posted 2000-06-22 03:49 PM

This poem made me think. I suppose it would be easier to gve up rather than figure out how to do something difficult ie. love. This is the first poem of yours that I have read and I like it a lot. You left a message under my poem "regret" and it made me feel that I could be a lot worse off in love. Thanks for the inspiration Jeremiah!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-18 09:44 AM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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