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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-06-19 06:19 PM


I want to feel you around me
Both of us tightly wrapped in each other's arms
Nothing to come between us
To love you all day and night
To whisper tunes of romance in your ears
To share all my life with you
To share every thought with you
These feelings always stay with me
For we have become very close
We will always meet
And I'll always have these memmories
You're so wonderful and mean so much to me
You've become a part of me
I try so hard to forget
But always fail in every attempt I make
Guess these feelings are not fake
I let you free now to desire what you really want
I hope that we meet again
We'll let our love live and grow again

Sincerely
A_L

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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-20 01:46 AM


i find a meaning here that i can't seem to put into words at this moment i'll tink on it and replie again but it is great work.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

2 posted 2000-06-20 09:57 AM


I can identify with this poem so closely that it makes me want to cry. A good poem, I just wiched you'd picked a different subject to write on  (

Love,
Crystal

Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift.

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
3 posted 2000-06-20 10:53 AM


Thanks for your comments..Crystallina I'm not very creative...I'm trying to write to on different issues..just bear with me.

Sincerely
A_L

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-06-20 11:32 AM


A_L~ this is a wonderful poem. I can relate very well and therefore it gives it more meaning to me.I hope that things work out. And you are creative...it comes from inside. One day, maybe when you're bored just sit and think...look to find your creativeness; I'm sure you'll find things about yourself you never even knew!! Keep writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

"Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"
"Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon"

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-17 02:02 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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