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Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-06-18 04:16 PM


My 300th Post  ! Inspired by Lovebug's "Could You Be the One for Me"

Love knows no boundaries
Love knows no fear
I've told you everything
And you're still here

Why take a chance
On a broken heart
No one ever cared
So why bother to start?

You make me believe
Things I never did
You can stay strong
When the others hid

You fill my heart
With so much love
Lighting up my life
I can't get enough

I want to trust you
More than you know
Just promise me this
Promise to never go

All The tears are gone
No longer need to hide
See, Now I have you to
Stay here by my side.

I love and trust you
I'll put aside my fear
So don't worry now
I'll always be here



"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W

© Copyright 2000 Susan Acacio - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2000-06-18 04:53 PM


this is a beautiful poem
i can totaly relate
i hope you gave this to who ever you wrote it about  
300 eh?? keep em coming !!!

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

2 posted 2000-06-18 05:10 PM


That was really really good!!!  I defintely relate.  That's one of my favorite poems out here, so far.  Keep it up!!
Bel
(For future reference, keep in mind I have very bad spelling)

LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697

3 posted 2000-06-18 06:10 PM


Angel, this is a beautiful poem! I'm glad that my poetry inspired something like this! Congrats on 300, also. I hope things work out with this person better than they did with the person I wrote my poem for!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Snickers
Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88
East Haddam, CT
4 posted 2000-06-18 09:12 PM


Happy 300th post!!   If this iz what u come up with for u'r 300th, I can't wait to see u'r 400th post!!    This was really beautiful, and I hope things work out for you.  Keep up the awesome writing!  

~<3 Alwayz~
**Nikki**

Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2000-06-18 10:17 PM


Jenabou~
Thanks so much  . I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yup, he was the first one to see it  .

Bel~
Thanks  . That really means a lot to me. I will!

Lovebug~
Thanks so much. I read yours and my boyfriend and I were going through something similar at the time and it just inspired me to write it. I'm sorry to hear about that. I hope so too. Thanks again  .

Snickers~
Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed. 400 is quickly approaching  .

Thanks everyone  

~Susie


"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-06-18 10:25 PM


Dearest Susie~ This poem is in more ways than one intriguing! I love the way you convey your true feelings through your words. Excellent work! Happy 300th! I'm workin on catching up! LOL I truly do hope things work  out for ya!   best of luck. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

"Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"
"Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon"

Alpiner
New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 9

7 posted 2000-06-18 10:27 PM


Oh Angel this is one of your best works and I know I've read most of them. It is so beautiful and heart filled. Also I promise I never want to go. And I'm so proud that you've reached #300 way to go, you're my favorite poet.      Love always,
                      Rich

Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
8 posted 2000-06-18 10:48 PM


Jessica~
Thanks I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You'll be there in no time  . I hope so too  .

Rich~
Thanks Sweetheart  . You know how much that means to me. You really are amazing. Love you.

~Susie


"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
9 posted 2000-06-19 01:45 PM


you poem is BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!CONGRATULATIONS on your 300th post!!!!hopefully everything will be good with you and whoever you wrote this poem for...
Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
10 posted 2000-06-19 05:30 PM


Erin~
Thanks so much  . I'm glad you enjoyed. Me too!

~Susie


"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
11 posted 2000-06-20 03:51 AM


this is a great piece of your heart and i hope the person you wrote it about enjoyed it as much as all of us did. good luck.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
12 posted 2000-06-20 10:05 AM


Jeramiah~
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. He loved it  . Thanks again.

~Susie


"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
13 posted 2007-11-17 02:01 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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