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Teen Poetry #3

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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-06-16 08:59 PM

He’s got those big brown eyes,
I love to stare into.
I think I may love him,
I hope he likes me too.

I wonder what he thinks,
When he stares in my eyes.
As I sit and daydream,
I think about our lives.

I believe hes the one,
Tell me, is there a chance?
I want him to hold me,
So I can have my dance.

I'm not so good with words,
As I'm sure it shows.
Just wanted a secret,
But now everyone knows.

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 06-18-2000).]

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-06-17 12:56 PM

Cute! I can relate. I love my chris. hehe.

well I hope everything works out for the best for you two!

Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

"Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"
"Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon"

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2000-06-20 05:24 AM

Lovely poem of hope. Well done !

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

3 posted 2000-06-20 03:19 PM

Hey, that was good!! I can relate. Best of luck to you!
Bel

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-06-21 01:59 AM

first of all i voted for this one i love it and i hope everything works out for you. great job keep em coming.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-06-21 02:55 AM

what can i say...i really like your poems... this poem reminds me sooo much of my myself when i am with my boyfriend. i just love staring at him but he hates it. but i am the same with some secrets its like just let me tell this one person and thats it.. ohh well.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-11-17 02:06 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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