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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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I sincerely hope that no one is offended by this poem. I'm aware that this is a teen forum, altough I do believe (or at least pray) that we all have the maturity to objectivly read this. Thanx. < !signature-->Musical Bodies Caressing softly along your thighs, while staring deeply into your eyes. Perfect like porcelain, your body in motion inside my arms with undying devotion. The lips I kiss upon your face are full and dazzling in sweet embrace. Your fingertips sweeping beside my ear; I hear their magic enchantingly clear. Entire bodies, our bodies in whole sinking together into one combined soul. Completing the needs in extacy's fashion with musically perfect movements of passion. Completing the needs of our hearts and our minds with pleasure and emotion genuinly combined. Jeremy D. Halstead 12/15/99 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." [This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (edited 06-16-2000).] |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow. I love it! And I don't think that it will offend anyone. You've described something exactly the way it was meant to be described - beautiful and emotional and meaningful. If anything, I only have more respect for you now. I would have been offended if this had been a trashy, sleezy depiction which is common these days. But the way you put it is an example of what we should all look for. Great job. You continue to amaze and captivate me. Much love and respect Kristin ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
 THAT's IT! Jeremy- will you marry me?  lol j/k. hey kid I love this poem!  it's been a while since we talked!  hopefully we can chat tonight after my interview. Behave yourself and quit melting my little heart! love ya lots~ see ya soon Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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