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*Rainmaker* (for everyone who has ever felt alone)

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since 06-14-2000
Posts 359
North of Hell

0 posted 06-15-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Kandi   Email Kandi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kandi's Home Page   View IP for Kandi

I wrote this about a year and a half ago for some friends who were going through hard times, but it's really for anyone who needs to be reassured that we are all unique, special, and BEAUTILFUL people.  Thanks for reading  


When you feel like all your hopes and all your dreams are forever lost,  I will find them and give them back to you.
When you think that that far off star will never be reached,  I will take your hand and pull you into the light.
When it feels like everything is slipping away,  and you think your dream world isnít close enough to get to,  I will wake you up and show you that you are already there.
When it seems as if you have nothing to gain and everything to lose,   I will give you the strength you need to risk it all.
When you are soaring so high that there is nowhere for you to go but down,  Iíll be standing in your shadow,  waiting to break your fall.
When you hit the bottom and think all hope is gone,  Iíll be standing over you,  reaching out to help pull you back up on your feet.
When is seems as if nothing is left and your soul has gone dry,  Iíll be your rainmaker.
And when you start to cry because it feels like you were never good enough,  Iíll be there,  telling you that you were never anything less than beautiful.  

 ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~
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since 05-25-2000
Posts 88
East Haddam, CT

1 posted 06-15-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Snickers   Email Snickers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snickers

This is so beautiful!!  It's a very sweet and inspirational poem, sure to let the person it was written for know how much you care.  Sometimes poetry is a great outlet to express to someone how much you care.  Because sometimes it seems like no one does.  Great job, I'm impressed by alot of your work.

~<3 Alwayz~
Jeremy Halstead
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since 06-01-2000
Posts 572
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 06-16-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

You wanna know something?... If there were more friends out there like you and me, there world would be a better place..I've come to realize that in my damn old age.  So often, we give ourselves for the happiness of friends, and just as often our friends can't find the love inside to do the same. I don't know if it's like that for you, but something tells me it is.  I noticed that the last lines of your poetry always hit hard, I like that....If you ever need to feel beatiful, you can email, I'm full of hope and wisdom.

Jeremy D. Halstead

 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."
since 01-31-2000
Posts 229

3 posted 06-16-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for Crystalina123   Email Crystalina123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystalina123

I like this one, it givce me so miuch hope for this big bad world  )


 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.
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since 07-02-99
Posts 597

4 posted 06-17-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

Beautiful, Heartfelt, and inspirational. I could use a friend like you, and so can many others  . Great Job


"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W
since 05-28-2000
Posts 152

5 posted 06-18-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

This is so's like a song.
Sometimes when you give so much and you don't get the same back it kinda hurts...
Anyway keep writing!

"You could be my unintended
Choice, to live my life extended...." Muse

"Even when we're apart we'll still be under the same sky," LJ Smith

"Hiding in the musty attic is Elusive
She sits, cross legged in a midst dark cobwebs
Several forms scurry to seek shelter
Beneath her levitating shadow.
Her back rigid , eyes glassy
Gazes intently at time escaping
Sliding, smoothly, as sand sprinkles
Through the hour glass,
A single tear grazes her misty cheek." Lani
Ethan Halo
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since 04-28-2000
Posts 820
on the roof again

6 posted 06-18-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

excellently versed. i liked it a lot. very heroic. saving someone from loneliness is one of the best feelings that exists. good work. i dig it.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
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Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 12-03-2007 08:28 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind


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