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What happened to the old gang?

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Senior Member
since 05-10-2000
Posts 528
Somewhere, between here and th

0 posted 06-15-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for Deranger   Email Deranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Deranger

Ok, just to throw some poetry in so this doesn't get deleted, here is a poem...
Anywho, i was wondering what happened to the old teen gang?   I admit i haven't been here for quite some time, but i didn't know that i would have nothing to return to. Well i dont think i will do much posting this summer, so this is probally the last one.  Til next year guys.

Little sister

Though you never know it,
I will always sit, over you
Protecting you as I never was,
Spare you, maybe from terror known
To me, nothing I can flee
Deep in me, now without cure
But youll see, everything will be alright,
I stay up all night, if you want

Dont cry, nightmares fade,
Life is hard, indeed,
But take stead in this;
I will always be there.
My duty as big brother,
Instilled by loving mother,
Nothing I deny,
To be upheld till I die.

You heal the pain in me,
Bright eyes, contagious smile
Childhood innocence,
Mine long lost, what a cost!

Grace fades, glory notwithstanding
Hell may freeze, but Id crawl on my knees,
Before I let the disease infect you, as well.
My wounds run deep, no matter the light you give me,
Ill never be alright, but for you
I fight.

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since 04-20-2000
Posts 32

1 posted 06-16-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for DaZeD&cOnFuSeD   Email DaZeD&cOnFuSeD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DaZeD&cOnFuSeD

I havent been in here in a while either and it looks like everyone disappeared too..
since 01-31-2000
Posts 229

2 posted 06-16-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for Crystalina123   Email Crystalina123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystalina123

I've been looking in teen poetry #2 where I normally post -- it seems that it's been closed and we're supposed to post here. I don't think alot of people know that!!


 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.
Senior Member
since 03-01-2000
Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 07-21-2000 04:51 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

Once again, a wonderful post.
Your poems have so much emotion in them I'm not sure what to say about them
All I know is that with a talent like that, you don't want to give it up.

Love Always,
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 07-21-2000 07:05 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This was such a beautiful poem Deranger!  What a loving and caring tribute from brother to sister ... she is a fortunate girl to have you by her side.  

Best wishes,
Senior Member
since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA

5 posted 07-21-2000 09:24 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Great poem.  Seems that she is lucky to have a brother like you.  Hope to read more from you next year.


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Vball Chickie1624
since 05-14-2000
Posts 119
New York

6 posted 07-21-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for Vball Chickie1624   Email Vball Chickie1624   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vball Chickie1624's Home Page   View IP for Vball Chickie1624

Hey's been a long time since I've read anything of yours.  It was a good poem and your sister is lucky.  If you get a chance will you read my poem "Mystery" please.  It's a couple days back I think, two or three.  I want your opinion on it.  Well I have to get goin! E-mail me...and I hope to read more of your poems.

Love ya

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you
Fairy Princess
since 07-19-2000
Posts 65
Fitchburg Ma, USA

7 posted 07-21-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for Fairy Princess   Email Fairy Princess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fairy Princess's Home Page   View IP for Fairy Princess

Good poem I liked it PEACE ~*~Minna~*~ aka ~*~THE FAIRY PRINCESS~*~

~*~What you see is what
you get~*~
the dark angel
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8 posted 07-22-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for the dark angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the dark angel

hey deranger
how's it going? ent been around 4 a while. u have work to thank for that. great poem babe. keep up the good work.
love ys!
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since 05-31-2000
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9 posted 07-22-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Deranger, what an excellent tribute to your sister! she's very lucky! and as for the old gang...I'm still here. lol. it seems as if people disappear and then lots of new people come in and it all gets confusing. well I hope you keep posting because you are very talented...Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 12-02-2007 08:28 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind


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