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What happened to the old gang?
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Ok, just to throw some poetry in so this doesn't get deleted, here is a poem... Anywho, i was wondering what happened to the old teen gang? I admit i haven't been here for quite some time, but i didn't know that i would have nothing to return to. Well i dont think i will do much posting this summer, so this is probally the last one. Til next year guys. Little sister Though you never know it, I will always sit, over you Protecting you as I never was, Spare you, maybe from terror known To me, nothing I can flee Deep in me, now without cure But you’ll see, everything will be alright, I stay up all night, if you want Don’t cry, nightmares fade, Life is hard, indeed, But take stead in this; I will always be there. My duty as big brother, Instilled by loving mother, Nothing I deny, To be upheld till I die. You heal the pain in me, Bright eyes, contagious smile Childhood innocence, Mine long lost, what a cost! Grace fades, glory notwithstanding Hell may freeze, but I’d crawl on my knees, Before I let the disease infect you, as well. My wounds run deep, no matter the light you give me, I’ll never be alright, but for you I fight. |
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DaZeD&cOnFuSeD Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32 |
Hi I havent been in here in a while either and it looks like everyone disappeared too.. DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ Dana |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I've been looking in teen poetry #2 where I normally post -- it seems that it's been closed and we're supposed to post here. I don't think alot of people know that!! Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Once again, a wonderful post. Your poems have so much emotion in them I'm not sure what to say about them All I know is that with a talent like that, you don't want to give it up. Love Always, Shell |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was such a beautiful poem Deranger! What a loving and caring tribute from brother to sister ... she is a fortunate girl to have you by her side.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Seems that she is lucky to have a brother like you. Hope to read more from you next year. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hey babe...it's been a long time since I've read anything of yours. It was a good poem and your sister is lucky. If you get a chance will you read my poem "Mystery" please. It's a couple days back I think, two or three. I want your opinion on it. Well I have to get goin! E-mail me...and I hope to read more of your poems. Love ya Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
Good poem I liked it PEACE ~*~Minna~*~ aka ~*~THE FAIRY PRINCESS~*~ ~*~What you see is what you get~*~ |
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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
hey deranger how's it going? ent been around 4 a while. u have work to thank for that. great poem babe. keep up the good work. love ys! THE DARK ANGEL! |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Deranger, what an excellent tribute to your sister! she's very lucky! and as for the old gang...I'm still here. lol. it seems as if people disappear and then lots of new people come in and it all gets confusing. well I hope you keep posting because you are very talented...Love Always~*~Jessica~*~*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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