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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
to kiss me with my own red lips to bloom like a flower then wither and die I am your nothing I am denial I am acceptance I am your tears to cry and fear of once myself to fall apart and be crumpled by years I am your nothing I am confusion I am anger I am your remorse And maybe if i found a way and maybe if i stopped caring i would forget you would forget we could go on as past disappears I can fall into the deepest well i'll drown myself i'll forget all about alone in the dark just as i wished no concerns here no people that push to just ignore and find ways to explore to find myself among everything else I am your nothing I am your hate I am your love I am nothing |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
Hey welcome  this is a beautiful poem. I especialy like these lines "And maybe if i found a way and maybe if i stopped caring i would forget you would forget we could go on as past disappears" just give it time,your heart will heal. i'll be looking for more of your work keep them coming  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to passions This was an excellent poem...full of depth and meaning..completely honest..I love that. Keep'em coming D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions  ! I loved the poem, you can tell you put a lot of your emotions into it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
That's a very smart poem. The way you relate yourself as being all of these different things expresses alot of creativity and imagination. Do you have a profile yet that we can all read?...Welcome to Passions. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow. I am in awe. That was very very remarkable. The only thing I hate about poems like this is that they leave me so speechless that I can't think of anything to say back to the writer. You are VERY talented. Welcome to Passions - we're going to like having you here. Much Love Kandi aka Kristin ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear anomaly, this reminds me of the lyrics to a nine inch nails song *heh*... just sounds something like his bitter nihlism... i, personally, prefer a bit more explication when dealing with emotional poems like this one, but you've got a good start here... and obviously a lot of powerful emotions driving your pen... keep up the good work... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Beautiful poem. Welcome to passions. I can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the good work. Jeanna "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey! Welcome to passions! Your work is very beautiful and educated. You seem to know the reality of heart break. I too understand.  But I also know that time; can heal anything; Including the heart. Best of luck.  and I'll be looking fo rmore of your work! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" "Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
If you are wondering why this poem came about again, well I decided to go thru each poet's poems that i haven't read. Thus i searched for all your poems in teen poetry#3. Am I glad I decided to do this for I would have missed this poem. You obviously know what you are doing, and it does seem like you are very talented. This poem is very good "to just ignore and find ways to explore to find myself among everything else I am your nothing I am your hate I am your love I am nothing" Just plain beautiful!!! keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow this is cool, I love the style and everything about this one. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was simply great anomaly. I thought this kicked a lot of ass. You are not my nothing buddy, you are an inspiration. Keep it up  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good job here!! I thought this was very well written, and I can completely relate. Kudos! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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