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Flying Away... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
A gentle sigh, realizing the dawn I know what I hold now, I've awaken to song; The soothing notes played across the sky My soul is your home and yours is mine, so I know we are forever both in spirit and in time But time is nothing at all, it shall never hold us behind We'll dance until death and even then we'll dance still, even if only my heart for the love that I feel ~~~This is my first time posting in this forum so sorry if this seems a bit odd....I just now typed it up which I don't usually do...I'll have to go and write it down in one of my journals soon...thank you for reading it.  ~~~Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
Since this is your first time posting here, welcome!!! I'll definitely be looking for more of your work! Your poem iz very beautiful and well-expressed. I love it!! You have talent!~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a great poem, I wish I could just type poems up! Wonderful poem, keep up the good stuff Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
this is a gorgeous poem i love your style of writing!! very well done keep it up!  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you all very much...I'm glad you liked it. D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dark Enchantress~ This was really good...You expressed what you are feeling really well...I wish that I was able to sit down and just type like you did with this one!!!2 thumbs up for you... P.S.~I figured out how to use the ICQ thing...And I added you to the list...But it says you have to authorize it...E-mail me when you get a chance!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was cool, I love the flow of it |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WOW!!! this so far is the best one I've read today. You are a very talented writer. I'd love to see you post more of your poems in passions. So, if you would please do us that favor, i'd love to read em. Thanks for sharing this "But time is nothing at all, it shall never hold us behind" I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
First of all, thank you all SOOOOO much for replying to my poem. Means a lot And I'm sorry I haven't been in here in a long time. I've been extremely busy with school but I'll be back soon. Love, Angel In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well written, glad to have read it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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