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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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You said you loved me and i believed you I though I could see it in your eyes but it was all just lies Because if you loved me,things would be different My heart would still be whole my eyes would still be dry and id still be in your arms Instead of sitting here alone staring at a photgraph of you wondering what i did wrong. [This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
do me a favor -- stop looking at that photograph and stop wondering what you did wrong!! chances are you didn't do anything! anyway---good poem, i really love reading your stuff..about the e-mail, i'll mail you later  keep the poems coming !!mr  "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenabou~~~This was good!!!I hope that you are now over what happened in this poem...i know what its like to just sit and stare at someones picture and think what I did to have them do this to me...I did it for months until I met my boyfriend who changed my world...And made my life happier then ever...All these guys want to do is sweet talk their way into girls hearts...And you know what we believe they are being honest...And we let them...I know I feel for sweet talk before... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this poem, it gets right to the point of the situation. Great expression!  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
short but direct. As the first replier has said, do me that same favor too. It doesn't do us good to blame ourselves for something that we actually know deep inside that we don't have any faults to. keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was really good. I liked it ALOT! Great job, keep writing!! Luv, SweetStuff ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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