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Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2000-06-13 02:17 PM



The crowd gathers around you in AW
as your skillfull tricks fascinate them

The yo-yo rolls off your long slender fingers with the greatest ease.
It's like you're not even trying.

You can do it all,rock the cradle,around the world,sleeper
It takes you no effort what so ever
Everyone knows you've been doing this for years

The crowd is left speechless when you leave for the day
your show is over .....for now

Only it wasn't a yo-yo you were playing with
It was my heart

You've ripped it out so many times for your personal pleasure

But the sadest part is that i let you

© Copyright 2000 Jenna-Nicole Boutilier - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-13 02:33 PM


Hi
Allow it to heal and don't allow it to take over you..

Sincerely
A_L

mr0001
Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39

2 posted 2000-06-13 05:46 PM


i absoluely love the comparison you used!! so many times i have felt that way...awesome poem!!!

   mr




 "crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.


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