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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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When i walk down the hall,I can feel them looking at me Their eyes burn through my skull and their hatefull words ring in my ears But i brush it off,I can never let my life be controled by them. They make the rumors, they try to destroy. And you listen to them,you believe them. You let them make you think im horrible. You are totaly taken by them. It's not fair,why do you do this to me? You say you love me but i can never believe you Because i realize now,that all along you were just one of them |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi I understand and I can very well relate to it. Don't allow others to rule your mind and you said it right...don't believe a person unless he's totally honest..don't fall into some trap and find hard to come out of it..live your life as you wish..happy and healthy.. Sincerely A_L |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
I like this. It's very honest and straight to the point. There are alot of "them" out there, and it just kills me sometimes. But you've got to learn to ignore them and live your life regardless of what they think of you. And if someone is gullable enough to belive what one of "them" says, then they don't deserve you anyway! Great job at expressing your feelings. Keep writing. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
once again -- good job!! i hate to say it but "they" never go away, but it's ok b/c there are people like you who force us to recognize "them" and realize how stupid and hurtful we can be when we become like "them." very well written, i like your style! mr  "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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