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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
you pushed and i bent you pushed and i bent you pushed and i broke what did you expect to happen? you can only push so far and i'm not that flexible "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
You are an outstanding poet you keep me coming back here hoping to read more of your work Your very in tough with yourself and have a beautiful way of expressing it. you seem to like my work also so im wondering do you have an e-mail adress? keep in touch!  |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
Wow!!! I really like this. It isn't long or in any standardized structure, but it's straight to the point and so true. Some people just ask too much of you, and you can only push so far. I think there's a point were we all "break". Great job! ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear mister, deceptively profound... i love the repetitive bending lines... definately adds to the feel of the words of this poem... keep up the wonderful work  sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Nicely done! you have a wonderful way of expressing yourself! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
Like... whoa... I've felt this before but I could never find the words for it... mail me subliminalfreak_@hotmail.com Apathetic Angel We're all dumb and jaded and I hope to God I figure out whats wrong... |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Profound, yet so invitingly simple. Excellent work. Ai yi! (Japanese for I Luv it ^_^) "Suicides have already betrayed the body. Still born, they don't always die, bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet that even children would look on and smile." -- "Wanting to Die" by Anne Sexton Adversity Builds character. - Japanese Proverb "'Even a fool has one talent'.....darn, I'm not even a fool." - My sister, the master of cunning wit |
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