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mickel2995
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 48

0 posted 2000-06-11 01:20 AM

It's been too many nights of with,
to suddenly have without.
It makes me stop,it makes me think,
it only makes me shout.
It's been too many nights of having,
to suddenly just be alone,
The many nights of sitting
and waiting by the phone.
It makes me stop,it makes me think,
it makes just cryout.
It's been too many nights
of wondering where you were,
knowing all I can do is
hope there is no other "her".
It's been too many nights of with,
to suddenly have without.
Now there is no you,
Now there is no us,
Now a part of me missing too
and it's all because of you.
It's been too many nights of with
to suddenly have without.

Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2000-06-11 10:05 AM

This was great. I especially love the lines:

It's been too many nights
of wondering where you were

You have no idea how much I can relate to those lines

. By the way, I think you missed a me in line 10 after makes. Again, I loved the poem, it was great

.

~Susie

"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood"

mickel2995
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 48

2 posted 2000-06-11 04:52 PM

Thanks angel for such a generous reply! And also, thanks for pointing that me thing out!! I need to be more careful proofreading, glad you enjoyed it! Micale

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

3 posted 2000-06-11 10:28 PM

This was a great poem and well written. Keep it up.

Jeanna

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2000-06-12 12:11 PM

It's always hard to be in a relationship like this, you just have to hold on and wait for better days. Good luck.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

5 posted 2000-06-13 12:25 PM

You have no idea how much this poem spoke to me.
its like YOU took MY life and wrote in down on paper
It's a VERY good poem,well written.and dont worry.......it gets better

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

6 posted 2000-06-14 05:56 PM

cale~I know who this poem is about~

lol I love you girl! and I hope that he will finally realize that you are the best thing that he has ever had and he's going to lose you if his behavior persists~;} you be good my dear and we'll get together ASAP!watch out world! here comes trouble

lol. SISTERS-4-LIFE!! Love ya Always~*~Jessica Lynn~*~

"Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"

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