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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-01-07 04:19 PM


The light has now faded taking sight,
Leaving me lonely in black of night,
In the field of love I have but blight,
Nothing will grown in black of night;
Raven hair flows as she takes to flight
Losing herself deep in the black of night,
Dark clouds covers the pale moon light
Deepening the feel of black of night;
Collapsing in pain against stone of white
Watching the passing of the black of night;
Thick fog surrounds all things too tight
Giving misgivings to the black of night,
Waiting forever for the return of light,
Barely lingering in the black of night.

Gloom 2K+1


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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2001-01-07 04:45 PM


I enjoyed reading this, i think that it was very good

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

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