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BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
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0 posted 2001-01-07 02:40 AM




Conviction of a Profit
Ability of a man
Rage strong enough to consume the Devil.

Fairy of mercy    
I Long for your kindness
Grace me with the sweetness of a tear.

© Copyright 2001 BitterSmoke - All Rights Reserved
Zyell
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA
1 posted 2001-01-07 02:26 PM


Hey i do like this!

you conveyed a lot with
the use of only a few words!

very good!


Life is an adventure
to be experienced

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-01-07 02:50 PM


Nice, i like how you always so much with so few words

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

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