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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Never Me I am caught between you and you And who I’ve always wanted to be; With your eyes my mind is open And through you is how I see. Your words, my mouth They are but one in the same And my night, your day As you play this vicious game. I am trapped, you are the snare And I twist and stuggle, am I free? I am caught between you and you And I am never me. Joann Renee' Muszynski 1/7/01 With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
HEY!! This was GOOD! And yeah I know How it feels to be stuck in between like that  Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Very good, I think we all know how it feels to be stuck between "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Yep, I'm apart of that club too, or at least I was. Just like being in the middle of the war between love and hate that rages inside one's self. Good work.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah, I understand that feeling... like why am I here? and who the heck am I?? Great poem! Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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