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dragonpoe
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0 posted 01-07-2001 12:21 AM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dragonpoe


Never Me

I am caught between you and you
And who Iíve always wanted to be;
With your eyes my mind is open
And through you is how I see.

Your words, my mouth
They are but one in the same
And my night, your day
As you play this vicious game.

I am trapped, you are the snare
And I twist and stuggle, am I free?
I am caught between you and you
And I am never me.

Joann Renee' Muszynski 1/7/01


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
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Dark_kisses_Within
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1 posted 01-07-2001 12:30 AM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

HEY!!
This was GOOD!
And yeah I know
How it feels to be
stuck in between
like that  

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Ginners
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2 posted 01-07-2001 02:54 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

Very good, I think we all know how it feels to be stuck between

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure
G. A. Webb
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3 posted 01-07-2001 09:51 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Yep, I'm apart of that club too, or at least I was. Just like being in the middle of the war between love and hate that rages inside one's self. Good work.  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 03-16-2001 04:13 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

Yeah, I understand that feeling... like why am I here? and who the heck am I?? Great poem!

Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia


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