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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2001-01-06 11:41 PM


so maybe i have had too much to drink and maybe i have been listening to "the only time" by NIN on repeat for the last hour, but too bad.  I wanted to write, i love to write, but i dont know how good this is and in the morning it will suck. or not, who knows, what do you guys think?

"I'm drunk and right now I'm so in love with you",
Those are the words playing in my head,
Over and over again I here them,
Trent singing as i am drinking,
Thinking about everything that makes sense,
And you and a moment passes,
Then another,
I miss you angel,
I love you angel,
I wish you were here angel,
Time is passing in fragments,
I'm trying to watch a movie,
But i can't even remember this guy's name,
Because the lines are playing over and over in my mind,
I know the cords,
I know all the words,
"I'm drunk and right now I'm so in love with you",
The bottle is empty and i roll it aross the floor,
I wish you could hold me tonight,
I want to fall asleep in your arms once more,
But you are half a world away in a haze of illegal smoke,
I am sitting here being drunk and missing you,
"I'm drunk and right now I'm so in love with you",
There are the words again I can't get them to go away,
Time is slipping away,
I miss you angel,
It's 3 a.m. and I just puked--again,
No one was here to hold my hair and i missed you,
468-2787--I just called your house--no answer,
Big surprise it is 3 a.m.,
But right now i am drunk,
And right now i am so in love with you,


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"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure


[This message has been edited by Ginners (edited 01-07-2001).]

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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2001-01-07 02:49 PM


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MysticWonders
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since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
2 posted 2001-01-07 04:46 PM


Whoa! i dont know what to say about this one*S* but i do know how it is to Miss someone you love  

BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

3 posted 2001-01-07 09:32 PM



Been there.  
In fact I still am there.
Was this the new years eve guy?


BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

4 posted 2001-01-07 09:37 PM



  I just read what I wrote...Did not come out right.  I was thinking of a friend (who is female) who had a new years eve partner that treated her like dirt.  Ought to put my foot in my mouth.
  -sorry  

G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2001-01-07 10:26 PM


Well, I thought that was cool. NIN tends to make us think of allot of things kand relates very well with the past, present and future. I empathize with the half a world away thing too. For you see, I'm smitten, by a kitten, that lives in jolley old England. Where as I, on the other hand live in So. Cal., "Surf City". Anyways, I liked this allot, keep up the good work, drunk or not...hehe!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
6 posted 2001-01-08 12:14 PM


DUDE I'M DRUNK RIGHT NOW TOO, MAN!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
ISNT THIS FORUM SHI* PHAT WHEN YOU'RE COMPLETELY SHI*FACED?????
I FEEL SUCH A RUSH OF INSPIRATION AND CREATIVITY!!! AND I UNDERSTAND HOW YOU CRAVE FOR THE ONE OF YOUR ROMANTIC AFFECTIONS AND REFLECTIONS.

LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.

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