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Etheral Choices of Multiple meaning

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Zyell
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0 posted 01-06-2001 10:25 PM       View Profile for Zyell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Zyell

Gazing upon the absence of light
observing a world traveling to the edge,
She dresses in fragile minds
granting endless time the process
of birth, the luxury of plush desires
and the adornment of vulnerable smiles
In her dreams he dreams, until her fingers
find the flesh that creates.
He is the King of colors, of images
in gold, the essence of verisimilitude
He lives only to view glory,
this beauty exquisitely made, she, the
captivator of polished stones
and droplets of zigzag
accentuating the art of splendor.
In the caress of mid night her body is cashmere
rain upon his skin, an etheral stream
of deliverance
The gods are cruel and twisted
like vines of grapes,
In their vicious games every night
her beauty fades, yet he stays the same

As the sun rises, she dies,
over and over again

                      


Life is an adventure
to be experienced
© Copyright 2001 Zyell - All Rights Reserved
Ginners
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1 posted 01-06-2001 11:30 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

I liked this it was very good

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure
Severn
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2 posted 01-07-2001 02:07 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very good indeed....

liking a LOT

K
Victoria
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3 posted 01-07-2001 09:36 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

hi hon..glad you are posting..enjoyed very much..HUGS

                      ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Zyell
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4 posted 01-07-2001 10:49 AM       View Profile for Zyell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zyell

Ginners, thank you, I really do appreciate
your reading and the reply

Severn, thank you very much!


Victoria, hey, and of course thank you!


*S*

Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced
a-alibaster
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5 posted 01-07-2001 11:58 AM       View Profile for a-alibaster   Email a-alibaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a-alibaster's Home Page   View IP for a-alibaster

Your imagery is absolutally wonderful...thank you for a grand lunchtime read!
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.




[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 01-07-2001).]
Zyell
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6 posted 01-07-2001 02:11 PM       View Profile for Zyell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zyell

a~Alibaster: thank you
for such kind words, I do appreciate
them very much!

*S*

Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced
 
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