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Zyell
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA

0 posted 2001-01-06 10:25 PM


Gazing upon the absence of light
observing a world traveling to the edge,
She dresses in fragile minds
granting endless time the process
of birth, the luxury of plush desires
and the adornment of vulnerable smiles
In her dreams he dreams, until her fingers
find the flesh that creates.
He is the King of colors, of images
in gold, the essence of verisimilitude
He lives only to view glory,
this beauty exquisitely made, she, the
captivator of polished stones
and droplets of zigzag
accentuating the art of splendor.
In the caress of mid night her body is cashmere
rain upon his skin, an etheral stream
of deliverance
The gods are cruel and twisted
like vines of grapes,
In their vicious games every night
her beauty fades, yet he stays the same

As the sun rises, she dies,
over and over again

                      


Life is an adventure
to be experienced

© Copyright 2001 Zyell - All Rights Reserved
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2001-01-06 11:30 PM


I liked this it was very good

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-01-07 02:07 AM


Very good indeed....

liking a LOT

K

Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-01-07 09:36 AM


hi hon..glad you are posting..enjoyed very much..HUGS

                      ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Zyell
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA
4 posted 2001-01-07 10:49 AM


Ginners, thank you, I really do appreciate
your reading and the reply

Severn, thank you very much!


Victoria, hey, and of course thank you!


*S*

Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced

a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

5 posted 2001-01-07 11:58 AM


Your imagery is absolutally wonderful...thank you for a grand lunchtime read!
Until...ali
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"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.




[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 01-07-2001).]

Zyell
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA
6 posted 2001-01-07 02:11 PM


a~Alibaster: thank you
for such kind words, I do appreciate
them very much!

*S*

Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced

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