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DreamSeeker
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since 11-17-2000
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0 posted 01-06-2001 07:35 PM       View Profile for DreamSeeker   Email DreamSeeker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreamSeeker

Damn you
the mirror
said

Damn yourself
the mirror
replied

Each trying
to stare down
the other side

This debacle
you have pulled
over me

Blanket
of icy
destruction

Waves my right
to the parishoners
pledged tithes

Beguiles the
very ceremony
of us

Now bantering quakeside
in forested eyes
we a singular

Apparition
born in the mirrors
lies

You're to blame
each side
of the mirror cried

Is it really shizophrenic
if you recognize
the others inside





[This message has been edited by DreamSeeker (edited 01-07-2001).]
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Ginners
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since 07-22-2000
Posts 359
Mullica Hill, New Jersey


1 posted 01-06-2001 08:14 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

Usually i can't even understnd what you write it just isnt what i am used to, but i really like this poem, i am not too sure i totally understand it, but i like it every much

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure
Swamp了aeryie
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since 12-04-2000
Posts 395
fairyland....of course;)


2 posted 01-06-2001 11:46 PM       View Profile for Swamp了aeryie   Email Swamp了aeryie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Swamp了aeryie

very thought provoking,the words you used were exquisite!!

sam


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon
BitterSmoke
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since 01-02-2001
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3 posted 01-07-2001 09:01 PM       View Profile for BitterSmoke   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BitterSmoke


Ha! I have had the same arguments.
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