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AVANTI
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

0 posted 2001-01-06 01:45 PM



I'm weaving what's not meant to last

And pondering on a bitter past

Wondering why it's meant to hurt

So this is life and meant to be

Could there be meaning that I can't see?

I wish to see a world of light

And hope to share a dream that's bright

With joys to last a hearts content

Still something in the shadow stands

And lurks around my wonderland

I cannot catch nor see or hear

I merely stand and feel deep fear

I'm locked inside a secret spell

Still to your knowledge all is well

I wondering if there's more to life

There's has to be more...I'll say that twice

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If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao




[This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 01-06-2001).]

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-01-06 01:55 PM


I have found myself wondering many times "Is that all there is" but many times I have smiled and laughed also...James
AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
2 posted 2001-01-06 02:01 PM


thank you for reading me James

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2001-01-06 02:04 PM


Sorry, double post....I've got Dutch fingers today.  

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-06-2001).]

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2001-01-06 02:04 PM


Oh there's more to life than you know girl and some day you won't know what hit you. All you need is patience.   Wonderful writing Avanti.  
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2001-01-07 07:19 PM


There is indeed much more awaiting you hon, like Munda said just believe and have patience.. Lovely writing hon
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


AVANTI
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
6 posted 2001-01-07 11:27 PM


There has to be more then!
Thanx Isis

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
7 posted 2001-01-08 12:08 PM


I believe there is DEFINATELY much more to life as we see it. I believe there is a world after death beyond any possible comprehension.

LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
8 posted 2001-01-08 12:32 PM


Thanx for reading me...Eagle Scorpion
And I sure do believe in life after death too

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



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