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AVANTI
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0 posted 01-06-2001 01:45 PM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for AVANTI


I'm weaving what's not meant to last

And pondering on a bitter past

Wondering why it's meant to hurt

So this is life and meant to be

Could there be meaning that I can't see?

I wish to see a world of light

And hope to share a dream that's bright

With joys to last a hearts content

Still something in the shadow stands

And lurks around my wonderland

I cannot catch nor see or hear

I merely stand and feel deep fear

I'm locked inside a secret spell

Still to your knowledge all is well

I wondering if there's more to life

There's has to be more...I'll say that twice



If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao




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JamesMichael
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1 posted 01-06-2001 01:55 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I have found myself wondering many times "Is that all there is" but many times I have smiled and laughed also...James
AVANTI
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2 posted 01-06-2001 02:01 PM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

thank you for reading me James

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao


Munda
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3 posted 01-06-2001 02:04 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Sorry, double post....I've got Dutch fingers today.  

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-06-2001).]
Munda
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4 posted 01-06-2001 02:04 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Oh there's more to life than you know girl and some day you won't know what hit you. All you need is patience.   Wonderful writing Avanti.  
Isis
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5 posted 01-07-2001 07:19 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

There is indeed much more awaiting you hon, like Munda said just believe and have patience.. Lovely writing hon
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

AVANTI
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6 posted 01-07-2001 11:27 PM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

There has to be more then!
Thanx Isis

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao


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7 posted 01-08-2001 12:08 AM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

I believe there is DEFINATELY much more to life as we see it. I believe there is a world after death beyond any possible comprehension.

LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.
AVANTI
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8 posted 01-08-2001 12:32 AM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

Thanx for reading me...Eagle Scorpion
And I sure do believe in life after death too

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao


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