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Lithium Barbie Doll

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Ginners
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0 posted 01-05-2001 08:41 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ginners

ok so i know this sucks and i have writtenstuff lots better but i wanted to get out what happened to me last night, i lost control....if you think this is ok tell me please if not i will try to re-work it and re-post a new one with the same title. i dont even know if i spell lithium right, oh well sorry if i didnt i have a spelling disorder, i'm no good at it

LITIUM BARBIE DOLL

Sometimes I lose control,
Even though I am a lithium barbie doll,
I don't understand why I do the things that I do,
But he always has all the answers,
"You are crazy so I have to forgive you"
What has happened to me,
Who have I become?
Just another lithium barbie doll for them to play with,
There is a pill for everything and everyone,
This is America we fix you if you are broken,
I know it was me and I know that I did it,
I put the hole in the wall,
I put my joint out on my arm,
I carved the marks and the letters on my wrist,
But no that isn't enough,
There is a pill for everything,
A pill for every day and every problem,
No one bothers to really help,
Lithium barbie dool laying in the snow,
Tears are freezing to my face,
My hair has mac and cheese stuck in it,
I threw the pot on the floor,
I can't feel my hands and my nose is so cold,
I am still smoking though some how,
A cloud from my breath and the smoke is surrounding me,
Lithium barbie dool that is me,
Maybe this isn't the answer,
Maybe this isn't what I need to be real again,
Lithium barbie doll sleeping in the snow,
Lithium barbie doll lost control


"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure


[This message has been edited by Ginners (edited 01-05-2001).]
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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 01-05-2001 09:02 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Nice one Ginners. I liked the whole concept about it. I hope you do regain the control and hold within yer life.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
qtpieelmo
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since 07-04-2000
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY


2 posted 01-05-2001 11:05 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Wow this is great & I'm glad u got it out   ~HUGS~ LOVE ELMO <3
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3 posted 01-06-2001 12:27 PM       View Profile for a-alibaster   Email a-alibaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a-alibaster's Home Page   View IP for a-alibaster

Ginners,
I must say that I was impressed! ...and the spelling, well , all I can say is that I have the same damned disorder...so no big thang~!
The entire idea behind this is wonderful, I think. Some times I wish I could write things like this, but it doesn't seem to happen.
Hope things are all back now, if not, well hang on, they can only get better some time or another...believe me, have been there and done all of the things you spoke of a million times over....
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.


[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 01-06-2001).]
brian madden
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4 posted 01-06-2001 03:10 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

There is a pill for everything and everyone,
This is America we fix you if you are broken,

powerful writing and I hope everything becomes better. take care of yourself.  

There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong
inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode
Ginners
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5 posted 01-06-2001 07:30 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

Thank you all you are always so nice to me.  i don't things will ever get better though, but i can deal, it just takes time
Swamp了aeryie
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fairyland....of course;)


6 posted 01-06-2001 11:52 PM       View Profile for Swamp了aeryie   Email Swamp了aeryie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Swamp了aeryie

absolutely,vry very good!! wow!! this one was really easy for me to relate to. i've often had the very same thoughtsbut could never have put them down with the same sincerity and emotion that you did. this ones going to y library!!

sam


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon
Ginners
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7 posted 01-06-2001 11:55 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

wow sam thank you very much
dragonpoe
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8 posted 01-07-2001 12:29 AM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

Very modern, contempory, with all the reality of America.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
Zyell
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9 posted 01-07-2001 02:24 PM       View Profile for Zyell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zyell

been there done that,
took a boo coo load of those little pills.  
Finally, though, I threw them
suckers a-WAY, now it's herbs
for me, but I can certainly relate!
I could feel the intensity, good
write, good for you....get it out!

Keep writing,
and keep searching, you'll
get your answers!

,
take care
*S*
Z


Life is an adventure
to be experienced
Ginners
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10 posted 01-07-2001 02:47 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

Thanks guys
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