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For The Broken Angel

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dragonpoe
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0 posted 01-05-2001 08:23 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dragonpoe


Not an exceptionally dark piece, but I thought I would post it here.

For The Broken Angel

Tattered wings, hanging low
Play your guitar for me, boy
Release those tears with
Rage and power
Strum the strings as your
Heart had been strung, but
Don’t break the tender music.

Cry for me, I know your pain
And as I mend your broken wings
I will listen with all my heart and
Every ear, and I cry beside
You , because I care.

Tarnished halo has a bit of shine
For no demon can destroy an angel
And you my friend are one of the rare
And tho’ your wings may be wilted
Your halo still shines.

And every dreamer knows, that to live
In the darkness that clings to us
Everyday, everyone, we must
Look for the Angel and take a hold
Of his halo

And hold on tight…

Joann Renee' Muszynski 1/5/01


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Ginners
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1 posted 01-05-2001 08:46 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

Oh my god this was really good for me.  I call my b/f angel and he plays guitar and he always says he has broken wings but he will still try to be my angel.  this poem just really made me think of him and it is a lot better then the poems i have written about him

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure
Ginners
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2 posted 01-05-2001 08:46 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

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[This message has been edited by Ginners (edited 01-05-2001).]
Jesse Jaymz
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Youngstown, ohio


3 posted 01-05-2001 08:48 PM       View Profile for Jesse Jaymz   Email Jesse Jaymz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jesse Jaymz's Home Page   View IP for Jesse Jaymz

*melts to a samll puddle*

thank you so much.  and with people like you in my life i know i will fly.  you have touched me.  *huggles*  take a hold of my halo anytime     thank you
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.
a-alibaster
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4 posted 01-06-2001 12:34 PM       View Profile for a-alibaster   Email a-alibaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a-alibaster's Home Page   View IP for a-alibaster

I found this wonderful...reminds me of a poem I wrote a while ago which is the opposite called "tattooed angel".
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.


[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 01-06-2001).]
JamesMichael
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5 posted 01-06-2001 01:52 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice dragonpoe...James
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