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Recipe 3

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DreamSeeker
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0 posted 01-05-2001 06:23 PM       View Profile for DreamSeeker   Email DreamSeeker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreamSeeker

Create Me
A mountain
of WordSong
lexicon Unseen

From a flash
of inheretant
Paradigms
Enchantment

Stir fry
a Savior
song of Soul
Salvation

in extra Virgin
olive oil
epicureans
savory delight

Vomit out
a government
People
Capable

And oh so willing
to enforce
Pitiless
Conformity

Pass the BeggingBowl
Please



The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise

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Ginners
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1 posted 01-05-2001 08:21 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

I dont unerstand your poem or really even like the form of it, but noone else had anything to say so i thought that i would say something.  

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure
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2 posted 01-05-2001 08:59 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

This was great. The title drew me into the poem and the poem was better than i'd thought it'd be. NIce one here.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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