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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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an old one from my note books, don't think it has been posted before, at least not when I was sober anyway.  =============================== Alcohol soothes my soul making me restful, where I slip into a daze folded on night-club tables. It preserves my flesh from ageing and keeps me shimmering. My eyes stare across the room, instead of at her face. She was but a wet dream dancing here for me but I could not concentrate. I am lost in glory of tribal dances, the strangers touch and fade off, a smoke filled room of beautiful pictures; fall out into night, the bright night hurts my eyes, I am walking in euphoria but watched as prey. I will not defend, I will succumb, elegant stars against the never-ending sky, I am duller than them, my thoughts speed randomly - I am in love with all I meet. Continue the crawl - senses dislocated and lying on the floor, all is positive, I sleep down sedated. The dawn rushed to meet me, and I answered back not sure of whether I was awake or still dreaming. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Aye sobriety as reality is Highly OverRated The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is great brian And I'm glad you brought this to surface like the head of a beer! Fantastic write my friend! Cheers!  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Brian, "OH what a night" I have to say I have had a few myself, you discrib it so very well could not of done a better job, and I think the title is a getter,  Loved it, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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