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0 posted 01-05-2001 02:18 PM       View Profile for forever_unforgiven2   Email forever_unforgiven2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for forever_unforgiven2


Can't you see them
When you close your eyes
When you know you're completely and utterly alone
When you're surrounded by a thousand faces and all
     you need is an ear
I don't seem to know how to feel
Sometimes I just want to kill
Breath escapes my open lungs
This numb body can't feel the tears
I've locked myself in my own comfusion
She's so close and yet knows the distance we hold
I'm so cold
I can't stand to be to close for to long
Stop smiling at me
I can't take it
I can't open myself this way
I'm trying to live her way
Just stop walking away
That's all everybody ever does
Walk away
You're giving me the option
I choose to stay
And be ignored
I'm torn and searching for that needle to sow me
I'm in your cup you refuse to drink
I can't help tasting sour
The sugar just sunk to the bottom
Through neglected hours
Do I make you sad
Because anger's just an extension of sadness
And you're always mad
I'll take my blame
Can you tell me again that I'm a disgrace
That I'm this way
That this is my reputed face
Everyday I get closer to jumping off this jagged
Wouldn't make a difference if I was alive or dead
Chances are to close to slim
I've jumped in my own pool but I don't know how to
Your words speak louder than the truth
I know you don't believe in me
Just that she'll be what I never could
You would
If I'm so invisible then why are you still grasping
    my throat
I'm still trying to kill this fly that's buzzing
    around my brain
I've got this broken glass sifting through my vains
If you squeeze any harder
They'll penetrate from the inside out
Are you scared yet
Do you want out
I'm forcing myself through another day
I'm trying to not walk away
From everything
I'm to scared to come home
They'd never recognize me
I'm trying so hard to be what I should but shouldn't
    is just me
I'm sorry I can't forget
Your words are my regrets
I can't see through you
I'm not sure I want to
Stained in my own blood
Deepening my own flood
I've kept this part of me from you
See my wrists
I know you'd look away
Sad but true
I'm so tall
I feel to small
I've been found guilty
Winner from a cheater
From the remaining blood will grow my wings
And feel myself in slow motion falling

[This message has been edited by forever_unforgiven2 (edited 01-05-2001).]
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since 05-08-2000
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San Alejandro, HI, USA

1 posted 01-05-2001 03:05 PM       View Profile for a_little_girl   Email a_little_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a_little_girl's Home Page   View IP for a_little_girl

Wow...this is some really great stuff. Welcome to Dark Passions.

**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**

[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 01-05-2001).]
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Posts 617
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 01-05-2001 04:18 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

very dark and painful. Gave me shivers

gave me shivers.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
since 11-17-2000
Posts 74

3 posted 01-05-2001 06:30 PM       View Profile for DreamSeeker   Email DreamSeeker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreamSeeker

vertigos invitation
unanswered never
as the emptiness
crushes all breath
as to the pit
follows one in

The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise

since 07-22-2000
Posts 359
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

4 posted 01-05-2001 08:13 PM       View Profile for Ginners   Email Ginners   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ginners

my god this is amazing i really enjoyed reading it.  it gave me shivers and i lost my breath but it was amazing.  welcome to passions and please keep writing

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure
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since 07-04-2000
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

5 posted 01-05-2001 10:52 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

WOW! (I'm speechless) Well Welcome 2 Passions!! This is a great poem--It gave me the shivers because it hit too close to how I too often feel ~HUGS~   SMILE ("When you smile the whole world smiles with you, when you cry you cry alone!") LOVE ELMO <3
since 10-13-1999
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

6 posted 01-06-2001 07:32 AM       View Profile for Deverone   Email Deverone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deverone

...WHOAH....Extremely powerful, fantastic writting. This has such darkness to that most of us have felt; I don't think I could have put all that pure feeling in there no matter how hard I tried.

Waiting to read more of your works.....


"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

since 01-02-2001
Posts 56

7 posted 01-07-2001 03:29 AM       View Profile for BitterSmoke   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BitterSmoke

I can't help tasting sour
The sugar just sunk to the bottom

I am in awe.
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