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Soul Liquid

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a-alibaster
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0 posted 01-04-2001 03:19 PM       View Profile for a-alibaster   Email a-alibaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit a-alibaster's Home Page   View IP for a-alibaster

Soul Liquid

Streaks of black
with a glimmer
of white
fading,
fading
to beautiful shades
of precious purple
slipping,
slipping
further down into
my drowning soul
twisting,
twisting
in
liquid
spiral.
(C)a-alibaster



"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.




[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 01-04-2001).]
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BitterSmoke
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1 posted 01-04-2001 03:38 PM       View Profile for BitterSmoke   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BitterSmoke

Beautiful.
qtpieelmo
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2 posted 01-04-2001 03:43 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Very Beautiful   LOVE ELMO <3
Dark Angel
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3 posted 01-04-2001 04:34 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

my drowning soul
twisting,
twisting
in
liquid
spiral.

oooh I loved this image.
I enjoyed it

Maree


I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~
dragonpoe
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4 posted 01-05-2001 08:13 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

Another powerful piece. I really like your work.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
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5 posted 01-06-2001 08:57 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

This was powerful, very good poem. A wonderful read!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
Zyell
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6 posted 01-06-2001 10:30 PM       View Profile for Zyell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zyell

i love purple, we should all honor
our shadows, your poem caused
me to think of such ! well done

*S*
Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced
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