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ma miller
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dungeonous


Blind blackness spiralous fall
in deep and rooted dankest hall
harbors legs of eight and more
their whispering touch against the spores
sends currents sprawling up through the chain
of bony nervous vertebrae


Wetness seeps into your alone
through thickly walls of crumbling stone
putrefied aroma's stank
draws the breath infusing rank
spears of darkened rotting ooze
impaling thoughts of ghostly who's


Locked behind the gates of hell
spun and chained of armored mail
vespers sung in harmony
the song of death and things to be
a prisoner's tune aloud we hear
and tighter still the rungs appear


Limb and bone stretched to alarm
the sounds of tearing ripping harm
with fingers turned and severed clean
with needles burned and driven free
cauterizing fresh the skin
of the alreadydead within


And when this nightmare, an end to it comes
my prisoner's own awakens from
the dream he's had in life sustained
his sickness stays to provide the rains
for growing dead and dying blooms
the blackest rose
of tortured
tombs


m.a. miller
01.02.01











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a-alibaster
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I am speechless.....this is straight up my alley...SIMPELY AMAZING!!!
until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.
Swamp了aeryie
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fairyland....of course;)


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Wow,wow,wow,this was excellent,absolutely excellent!! Wow. It was amazing and the feelings it created were just superb. I love the way it crushed my mind and sent me straight to the  dungeon. amazing

green eyed monster from the black lagoon


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon
ma miller
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3 posted 01-05-2001 09:16 AM       View Profile for ma miller   Email ma miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ma miller

a-alibaster and Swamp了aeryie ...

thank you for reading and your kind comments ...

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brian madden
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ireland


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this sent shivers down my spine, very dark.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy
Severn
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Definitely dark...brrrrrrrrrrr...shivers.

K
 
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