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My Prison

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Lonely Shadow
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since 03-14-2000
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0 posted 01-03-2001 12:44 AM       View Profile for Lonely Shadow   Email Lonely Shadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Lonely Shadow's Home Page   View IP for Lonely Shadow

Fear destroys the mind
doubt prevents the action
anger kills kindness and love
hesitation misses the moment
depression kills the soul
with all of these I stand alone
for they are my jailers
for they are my prison
I am sentenced to death
to rot forever in my tomb of sorrow forever


Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.
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a-alibaster
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1 posted 01-03-2001 01:05 PM       View Profile for a-alibaster   Email a-alibaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a-alibaster's Home Page   View IP for a-alibaster

Sort of reminds me of a poem that I wrote a while ago entitled Sorrow Weeps.
Nice wording here.
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


2 posted 01-03-2001 06:35 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Fear destroys the mind
doubt prevents the action
anger kills kindness and love
hesitation misses the moment
depression kills the soul
with all of these I stand alone
for they are my jailers
for they are my prison
I am sentenced to death
to rot forever in my tomb of sorrow forever

oh my..some days and  many of them this is me...huggzz..definitely can relate *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


dragonpoe
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since 11-12-2000
Posts 617
Palm Bay, Florida


3 posted 01-05-2001 08:09 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

strongly said! Very well done, a good read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
Deverone
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since 10-13-1999
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA


4 posted 01-06-2001 07:14 AM       View Profile for Deverone   Email Deverone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deverone

WOW...... I can feel the words and emotions while reading this, as if you knew what I have felt for a long time.

It is good to get those feelings out every once in a while though; they can hurt deeply if you hold on to them too long.



Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

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