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BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54


0 posted 2001-01-02 11:07 PM



Pain cleans me.
Soft fermented grapes soothe me.
Misfortune haunts me.

But in the end, my old friend Lonelyness melts even the most crystalized heart.


© Copyright 2001 BitterSmoke - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2001-01-02 11:56 PM


Wow, very dark. Loneliness does pain.....but hopefully we'll all pop out of it.

by the way, welcome to passions!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2001-01-03 01:36 AM


Yes it does
Good write here
btw... Welcome to Dark Passions!

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
3 posted 2001-01-03 03:38 AM


Welcome to Dark Passions. Judging from your first post, you'll find yourself in good company here.

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2001-01-03 11:04 AM


Welcome, Welcome, Welcome...
I hope your stay is a grand one.
...and loneliness , at times, seems. too, my welcomed friend.
until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
5 posted 2001-01-03 03:34 PM


Welcome to passions, i am looking forward to reading more of your work, i hope it will be soon, i really like this poem, even though t was a little short for my tastes, but it was very dark and nicely written.  keep up the good work.  and once again welcome to passions
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2001-01-03 08:36 PM


Welcome!!!!  Wonderful first post, Lonliness - a comrade but don't let it be a conquerer!!  
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


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