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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2001-01-02 01:18 PM


~A letter for Love~

do you close your eyes when you kiss me?
when i'm sleeping will you hold my hand?
when i fall into your arms,
will you be the strongest man.
will you keep the words unspoken
can you fix me when i'm broken
this i need to know.
will you stand tall
and above all
will you love me?

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
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1 posted 2001-01-02 04:38 PM


very short and to the point, but I like it i think you have captured the questions that every girl wants to know in just these few lines
qtpieelmo
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2 posted 2001-01-02 05:01 PM


Wow! Although it is small & short it holds soo much power & truth to it--i think i ask these questions a lot too--even if i dont say them out loud--it is what i really want too--great work   LOVE ELMO <3
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