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Rose Petals & Thorns!

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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY


0 posted 01-01-2001 10:34 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for qtpieelmo

Your love is like a rose,
it's open then it's closed.
Double-side, intertwining,
slowly dieing & then reviving.
When I think it's dead,
it shows some life again.
Roots are sprouting,
no more pouting.
Silky petals caress my skin.
Must be gentle,
delicate petal,
falling apart in my hand,
I've lost it once again!
A thorn is stuck,
blood is drawn,
I have no luck,
no green thumb.
Sprinkle some droplets,
to show that I care,
it looks pretty lifeless,
but the seed is still there.
I'll come back tommorrow,
my little flower,
& bring you back,
with all my power!

~Love is like a rose, it may die w/o the proper care! @}---}--- ~

  
LOVE ELMO <3





[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 01-02-2001).]
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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY


1 posted 01-01-2001 10:35 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

I want to give this to my ex-boyfriend but I couldn't think of a creative name & i think the poem still needs some work so please help me if u can   Thanx LOVE ELMO <3
*prevailing*darkness*
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Port Richey, FL


2 posted 01-01-2001 11:20 PM       View Profile for *prevailing*darkness*   Email *prevailing*darkness*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *prevailing*darkness*

Thorn of Life, Petal of Death.
It's backwards, I know, but it's just what popped into my head. And I loved the poem, by the way, and feel it needs no further work. But I understand the need to change things, so if that's what you want, go for it!!!! Great piece!  

*Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.*
qtpieelmo
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3 posted 01-01-2001 11:38 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Yea thanx--I just want it to be perfect for him & the more i read it, the worse it sounds, i usually just write something down & never read it again, but this one i want to give away so i have to make sure it's perfect   lol LOVE ELMO <3
qtpieelmo
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4 posted 01-01-2001 11:43 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

our love hurts, then is great again soo i like the petal & thorns idea, but i'm not sure it fits the way u put it, but it did open up my mind a lil more so thanx--Hmm like Rose Petals & Thorns or sumpthin like that?   LOVE ELMO <3

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 01-01-2001).]
*prevailing*darkness*
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5 posted 01-01-2001 11:45 PM       View Profile for *prevailing*darkness*   Email *prevailing*darkness*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *prevailing*darkness*

lol. Thanx for making me laugh a little. I needed that. And you are very welcome... glad I could help expand your horizon of thought

*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*

qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY


6 posted 01-02-2001 02:37 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Thanx 4 all your help prevailing darkness--i decided to name it Rose Petals & Thorns in lack of a better name & i wanted to send it to him--so if any1 has sumthin better i'd like to know--thanx   LOVE ELMO <3
brian madden
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7 posted 01-02-2001 02:52 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Elmo, love is a complex thing, enjoyed the poem. I am sure that he will love the poem also

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy
qtpieelmo
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8 posted 01-02-2001 03:56 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Thanx Brian--Yes it is very complex, but I am determined & I refuse to give up   LOVE ELMO <3
qtpieelmo
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9 posted 01-04-2001 11:36 AM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Well I finally got the courage to send this to my ex-boyfriend--he hasn't told me what he thought about it yet, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed--lol   LOVE ELMO <3
qtpieelmo
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