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Lonely Shadow
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since 03-14-2000
Posts 135
Virginia


0 posted 01-01-2001 02:27 PM       View Profile for Lonely Shadow   Email Lonely Shadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Lonely Shadow's Home Page   View IP for Lonely Shadow

Here I am
alone and unwanted
invisible to those around me
seen by those who know me
but cast aside like garbage
they all look past me
I do not exist but I am here
a shadow amidst the wall of life
a lonely shadow
fading away with
the dying of the light



Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.
© Copyright 2001 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
*prevailing*darkness*
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since 12-18-2000
Posts 40
Port Richey, FL


1 posted 01-01-2001 11:43 PM       View Profile for *prevailing*darkness*   Email *prevailing*darkness*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *prevailing*darkness*

Hmmm... I don't even know what to say, but I felt the need to reply. This is short and sweet, yet so incredibly powerful. I can honestly say that I know how you feel. Just don't fade away, because I'm sure you have a lot to offer to the world. Great work!!  

*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*

BitterSmoke
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2 posted 01-02-2001 11:22 PM       View Profile for BitterSmoke   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BitterSmoke

I too have visited the land you speak of.  I hope you hit bedrock soon.
Dark Angel
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3 posted 01-03-2001 05:21 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lonely Shadow, this is very sad, but let me tell you something....

you are not unwanted!
you are not garbage!
you do exist!

Just keep that light from fading
keep it glowing nice and bright
welcome those around you, into it ok.  

Maree


I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~
Dark Angel
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4 posted 01-03-2001 05:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

ooops

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-03-2001).]
HiddenSparklez
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since 12-29-2000
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British Columbia, Canada


5 posted 01-04-2001 10:53 PM       View Profile for HiddenSparklez   Email HiddenSparklez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HiddenSparklez

I've been there, and hopefully you writing this has helped in more ways than one. Cause I know writing as helped me stay away from things I know I'm bound to regret.
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