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Lonely Shadow
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-01-01 02:27 PM


Here I am
alone and unwanted
invisible to those around me
seen by those who know me
but cast aside like garbage
they all look past me
I do not exist but I am here
a shadow amidst the wall of life
a lonely shadow
fading away with
the dying of the light



Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

© Copyright 2001 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
*prevailing*darkness*
Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36
Port Richey, FL
1 posted 2001-01-01 11:43 PM


Hmmm... I don't even know what to say, but I felt the need to reply. This is short and sweet, yet so incredibly powerful. I can honestly say that I know how you feel. Just don't fade away, because I'm sure you have a lot to offer to the world. Great work!!  

*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*


BitterSmoke
Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

2 posted 2001-01-02 11:22 PM


I too have visited the land you speak of.  I hope you hit bedrock soon.
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-01-03 05:21 PM


Lonely Shadow, this is very sad, but let me tell you something....

you are not unwanted!
you are not garbage!
you do exist!

Just keep that light from fading
keep it glowing nice and bright
welcome those around you, into it ok.  

Maree


I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2001-01-03 05:22 PM


ooops

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-03-2001).]

HiddenSparklez
Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
5 posted 2001-01-04 10:53 PM


I've been there, and hopefully you writing this has helped in more ways than one. Cause I know writing as helped me stay away from things I know I'm bound to regret.
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