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Dark Poetry #2

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stoned'
Junior Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 14

0 posted 2001-01-01 01:22 PM

So much pain is still to be felt,
So much love is still locked in,
Flying unbounded in some unknown part of me,
Both ecstasy and misery, anxiously waiting to be discovered,
Until, at one point the time will come when this road would end,
Without any kindness or feel, without waiting
So I wistfully make preparations
Gladly accepting this one night stand with my own death,
For all it will take is one night and a few golden drops of the sun,
And soon a heart will be broken,
And so I wonder ,rather foolishly,
Why not accept this truce with darkness,
So that when all my love and pain is passed on to him,
And he gets oh so tired of giving in return his own,
When nothing is left,
Ill silently let my secret love (death) carry me into oblivion!

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2001-01-01 02:42 PM

Oh Wow--Great Poem--Very Powerful--I Loved It

LOVE ELMO <3

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

2 posted 2001-01-02 10:07 PM

this was a lovely dark poem. a lot of feeling behind this.

jann elizabeth

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