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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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ALONE I'm building my own prison. I threw away the key. Locked in by silence, alone, inside of me. Here on my own condition, sucked in by solitude. Stuck here & lonesome, I never had a clue. No one else can find me now, I'm not where they thought I'd be. Darkness is all around me. Help! I cannot see. Too far in, to find a way out. Only I can hear me shout. Insanity is near me, I can't be my best friend. No one else understands me. I can't wait until the end! ELMO <3  |
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stoned' Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 14 |
Hey I love the poem , cos i can relate to it totally!Nowadays i m going thru more or less the same situation!So i know how u feel  Cant give u any meaningful advices cos i m desperataley in need of some myself!But can very much emapathise with u!Hugs lets just pray these blues pass by soon! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea it's hard sometimes-huh? ~hugs~ right back at ya! I'm glad I'm not the only one that feels this way but angry because i don't know the way out either thanx for replying LOVE ELMO <3[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 01-01-2001).] |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
Odd, isn't it, how we all say that we can't find our way out. How many of us who make that claim wonder how we even got IN??? I do. I wonder all the time. "Trying to find a way out, unsure of how I got in" (a line from one of my poems) This was a really good piece, though, and if anybody finds the way out, be sure to let the rest of us know. Great work, though!!*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living* |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea--its like one big mouse trap or sumpthin lol--Yea please inform me if any1 finds the way out lol Thanx LOVE ELMO <3 |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive writing. I can relate to this. I too have felt this sort of lonely feeling. I think you will get through it though, if experience is any source of knowledge. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
THANX FRACTAL--I HOPE SO LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
Well written peice....i too can relate. i am in what seems to be a like spot. my cynical mind tells me it will never end,but it must. i'm just waiting. well expressed poem!! swamp "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe thanx swamp--yea i know that place all too well--lol LOVE ELMO <3 |
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