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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2001-01-01 10:56 AM


TWO BECOMES ONE

I realize I was wrong,
but you're already gone.
The us is now I,
I sit & wonder why.
Together fell apart,
along with my heart.
Them became she,
they became just he.
The you & I ran away,
they no longer want to stay.
Two becomes one,
we are now done.
Apart are our names,
it'll never be the same.
I liked being two,
especially with you.
What now can I do?
It's no fun being one.
I forget how that's even done.
Even if you are just my friend,
my love for you will never end!


LOVE ELMO <3

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qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-01-01 06:01 PM


:Þ~~
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2001-01-01 06:34 PM


It may never end, but it well lessen, and be put on the shelf where in the future you can again look at it, share the memories and emotions and be grateful for what you did have....  Nothing dies completely....
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2001-01-01 10:30 PM


Awe thanx isis ~HUGS~   LOVE ELMO <3
jenifeather
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 31
Here
4 posted 2001-01-02 12:38 PM


this is such a great poem. i know how you are feeling. feel better write the same. terrific.
jennifer


who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams
who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream
-the cars


monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
5 posted 2001-01-02 01:12 PM


I know how you feel i am going through it right now and i am tired of feeling lifeless
i am putting my foot down and i am crushing the head of that serpent that creeps in our lives to destroy the joy that we can have in Jesus (i was in love with Him for 18 years and i met the devil in person after 17 days of seduction i fell at his feet i went back to my vomit and now i am trying to get back to Him and it seems  impossible because i still have strings attach to my brain that won't disolve yet maybe i will have victory over this or else i will be depress for the rest of my life over something that i cannot have, illusion, it was all an illusion.

HUH! i can't believe i said that because i feel so weak now i want to sin with the liar whom i love
it is a real battle  to let go
a little bit of me wants to win
only a little bit and that feeling of winning z'got to win or i lose

and i feel for you so very much
and your poem was fantastic
fantastic suffering
Now i am wishing for you
A FANTASTIC RECOVERY

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
6 posted 2001-01-02 02:35 PM


WOW! I didn't expect such strong replies to this one! Thanx Every1! & good luck in all your relationships! I'm working on mine now   LOVE ELMO <3
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