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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-12-31 08:52 PM



Put your money where your shot is
So get right to your bizzzzzz!
Yeah, for  your quite the player
And such a smooth  soothsayer
You have plans that spell bind
You love to blow a woman's mind
You know what moves to make
How to take  the high stakes
Keep your image mysterious and coy
Play your lover like a  shiny new toy
You like to rack em tight
Then watch your prey fight
Your quite the seductress
Mesmerize your mistress
Keep her in your sticky spun web
Just like a tide that is ebb!
The game is all in your head
Your victory being in your bed

© Copyright 2000 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-12-31 09:27 PM


Notching another one on the bed post, but the greatest victory is won in love. Enjoyed the poem.  

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-12-31 11:59 PM


I agree victory is found in love
great poem holds alot of truth for some
but there always comes a day when the tables get turned on them
anyways great job
jane

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