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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Yesterday he turned away, though I fell to my knees and begged him to stay. He stepped casually over the spot where I lay. But this is today and this night I will say I am up from my knees and someday he will pay with the loss of his heart as his life turns to gray. (I'm not bitter, nope, not me...) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
me neither Sandra. . . but they will pay. . . excellent poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Such a heartfelt cry of a loss of that one true love. I wish for you only happiness in the year to come. You will find it, you deserve all the beauty of which you write of. Love you, Elise |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Beautiful piece here. And it isnt bad to be bitter! It helps us heal!! Good write ! And I hope it helped you Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sandra, any person who tosses love aside like that deserves to pay, and I think the best way to maake him pay is to find someone who could do what he could not, love you for the beautiful person that you are. enjoyed the poem, and take care. < !signature--> In the morning I am a recluse,lost in memory,ideal situations and convulsions... They built pop mart for Bono so he could gaze out across the baay and sing about mountains maybe" Whipping BOY [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I regret what I've lost...and cherish what I've found....tends to make life bitter sweet.....Good write!! I liked it›››it made me feel.. once again!! Thanx!!! (A New Year!! What wonderous things are to come!!??) Click |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
LOL--I like this one--I can definatly relate to it right now  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its as if they don't have any feelings and still the day will come when the feelings stare them in the face...not a pleasant experience...I have experienced both sides of this...James |
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