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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-12-29 11:40 AM


The darkness takes over
The inner you
It takes your breathe
And all thats true
Its evil plot
To take your being
Twists it up
Without you seeing
It pretends to be
A friend with you
Making you safe
But leaves you blue
Just look close
Before you call
The Darkness is
Not a friend to all
Take my words
And you will see
The Darkness is not
A place to be


Hmmmmmm just a little warning!    Not that I would know or anything ummmm yea thats it!

Peace ya'll  


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
1 posted 2000-12-29 01:59 PM


Very interesting... i liked it =)
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Member Rara Avis
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Twilight Zone
2 posted 2000-12-30 03:02 PM


One thing about darkness is the inability to see.  The problem is though we are in the light, some of us still choose not to see.    This is a really good poem.  Thanks for the wonderful read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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