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Victim of My Own Stupidity

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xEmperorEmber
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It comes from the inside
I cant run away from my shadow
Unless I become a child of the darkness
But even when all the light is gone
And I am all isolated and sealed
The clean mind dicentigrates
And now i am lost in a breeding ground for hate
The core of me expands leaving a hallow center
A never ending hole
A hole that takes anything pure and regurgitates
An equal and completely opposite negitive
And the motives that brought me to this point
Those motives have long since disolved like a piece
Of delicious candy in my mouth
Further irony to expand my hallow core
No one comes to visit anymore
I dont remember how to speak
And the faces I use to adore and whom
Of which promised to be here
Are with all of you now
I am the wretched


"The biggest ocean can not stop a man from drowning" - Paul Watley
© Copyright 2000 Paul Watley - All Rights Reserved
baerlon
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1 posted 12-25-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for baerlon   Email baerlon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit baerlon's Home Page   View IP for baerlon

All I can say is WoW and Ouch.  This is powerful and touches the heart.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed
Hardrock
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2 posted 12-25-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

xEE...First off, let me say "Great Read"...very well done.  Secondly, it's not a matter of stupidity.  We all make choices, some good, some bad...but they are just choices.  Why we make them, good or bad, is a mystery, but all things happen for a reason.  The choice you face now is, what do you do about it?  For me, I just move on.  I look for other places, other situations to make other choices.....and I just hope for the best.  Few things in life are irreversible.  There's still a world out there just waiting for you:  Go live it.  Hardrock
Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 12-25-2000 05:23 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Still haven't killed the cancer. Will we ever? Maybe someday.

Well anyway, excellent poem and all that stuff.  



In order to be good one must know evil.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

*prevailing*darkness*
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4 posted 12-26-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for *prevailing*darkness*   Email *prevailing*darkness*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *prevailing*darkness*

Wow. That was really deep... I loved it. Regurgitating all that is good and making it something completely opposite and furthermore equal... that just kicks me in the gut... I really feel this one. Wonderfully written!

*Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.*
Lana
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5 posted 12-27-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for Lana   Email Lana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lana

you lost me with the first line???
what comes from the inside ???

what????

other than that the piece was moving.
Kethry
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6 posted 12-27-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

xEmperorEmber
"I am the wretched" great line.
Don't worry about the choices you've made, you can't change them but you can learn from them. I agree with Hardrock, move on with your life if you can. Writing helps.
*HuGS*
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.

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7 posted 12-29-2000 03:08 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Wow I liked this one a lot. I am going to have to echo everybody else.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

xEmperorEmber
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8 posted 07-15-2001 06:20 AM       View Profile for xEmperorEmber   Email xEmperorEmber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xEmperorEmber's Home Page   View IP for xEmperorEmber

thanks
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