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Candy Floss and Clouds
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Candy Floss and Clouds |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Pass the pain Candy Floss and clouds Feel the Rain Candy Floss and clouds We are alone in the sea Candy Floss and clouds Thrown by the pain Candy Floss and clouds lost in a heartfelt plea Candy Floss and clouds Feel me Floating on Candy Floss and clouds Racing the fairies and fowl In a space and time And creativity Lost am i on the space no longer seen Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
i liked this alot!! It was kind of like amix between a bob dylan song and a faeryie tale.lol whatever that means. Candy floss and clouds is such an interesting phrase,it has a strange kind of sound to it,not sure what it reminds me of,but i liked it. samantha "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this was very nice, and i agree with above... had a great feel to it. ~Dawn "Like a soul without a mind, in a body without a heart, Im missing every part." Unfinished Sympathy-Massive Attack |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I liked this, I dont know if the term "candy flossing" means the same to you as it does me, but if it does the clouds fit nicely. this reminds me of a summer and the shore "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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