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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-12-21 10:23 PM


Oooooooo.... you ladies man......
Having a problem handlin the cram?
You know the one I mean
Those emails that reach out and  scream!
The ones you can't remember
[Profanity edited], they've been there since September!

You have forgotten to those which YOU have replied
Just let them sit in the folder marked, "DENIED"!
I know all to well of the last one I elude too!!!
See, I am there amongst that dead pile of doo doo!!!!!!

I must of lost your interest????
I  know YOUR type
Only the best!
Not a problem you see.......
Just wanted to send you a ~~~teehee~~~

Mess with your HUGE ego,  MY DEAR!
No need to respond to someone,  unless sincere!
So,  I thought I would let YOU know
I gave up on YOU a LONG time ago!

I enjoy your electric  poetry along with the rest
For *your* CHARM,  well..it is amongst the best!
BUT, don't call on THIS lady as YOU think you may
For she has went far..... far away....

Far away  in her soul &  heart
A place to where she will never part
YOU were once a nice thought indeed
A promise,  of an untainted seed
The one she prayed would grow
But instead,   found a severe and ........


             *unusual strange undertow*


Illusion...I edited out your profanity in  accordance with Passions guidelines. Thanks

Kamla.



[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-22-2000).]

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-12-21 11:01 PM


Hon this is so heartfelt.  Internet romances are such a dangerous thing, so many times people get hurt, only the rare and I mean RARE few ever really make it.
So sorry for you but take a little advice don't mourn him over Christmas instead look on this Christmas as 'New Beginnings'.
*hugs*  Merry Christmas
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-12-22 09:38 AM


Hmmmmmmmm.... I like the attitude of this one!   Very well said! This kind of stoked some coals.. though, I'm not sure if I'm angrier at the one who does not live up to what he makes himself to be.. or the one who believe's him. Either way.. these internet games can be hell!  I think you've got the right idea!! Great write!

Sheila

MysticWonders
Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
3 posted 2000-12-22 10:37 PM


This was a good one! I think everyone has fell under those internet games  
I love the attitude in this one too*S*
Danyel....*

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
4 posted 2000-12-23 04:04 PM


This was good,  2 1/2 years i spent in a relationship that statted on the internet and then moved to somewhere else-my bed- then i was thrown away.  very good poem

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2000-12-24 02:49 AM


I can only echo whats been said already. Sadly ths happens all too often.  I like the way you have expressed this, Take care!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


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