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MysticWonders
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since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY

0 posted 2000-12-20 12:36 PM




Remembering the day
Our eyes locked in place
You came all that way
Just to see my Smiling face
So nervous at first when You
Opened the Hotel door
I just stood in the corner
My eyes quickly lowered to
The floor
With a gentle grasp
You took my hand into yours
And invited me in
We talked for awhile
And that is whene our Love
Began
On that very first night
We made love to each other
Caressing and Molding like there
Was no other
I couldn't believe how comfortable i felt
Wrapped up in your arms
With my head buried benealth
Your Chin
It was then with a tear in your Big brown eyes
You whispered to me
I will love you my princess
Until the day i die
I will never let you go
I will fight for our love
To the end
The distance we share is the
Only thing
that will hold us apart
Soon we will always be together
Sharing a house full of love
Keeping each other close to our hearts
Where there we shall be safe and
Warm
Afraid to close my eyes after
hearing those sweet loving
Words
Knowing that the morning light Will take you away from my sight
And there i will be left lonely And Scared and have an empty heart




If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :(

© Copyright 2000 Danyel L Azar - All Rights Reserved
Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
1 posted 2000-12-20 01:44 AM



Hi Danyel ...

This is so sweet ... achingly sweet ... =)
Fret not, Love comes to those who believe and wait ...



~regina

[This message has been edited by Verve (edited 12-20-2000).]

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-12-21 09:34 PM


I completely agree with Verve... you have a special heart, Danyel.. I wish you luck.
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