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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-12-19 08:07 PM


Daddy's Lost

Daddy's lost
where did he go?
the man that taught me
to share  
to care
to respect others
and how grow
How  to forgive
and be forgiven and have
compassion for one another

How to Love and  have patience
and understanding too.
How to be a friend
when I didnt have a clue

How to be honorable and honest
and how to be strong
without hurting another
as I traveled along

But who is this man
thats taken his place
fussing and cursing and
turning red in the face.

Holding grudges with babies
that love him so dear
that are waiting
for him to show them
what is not clear.

He gave me character
as he watched me grow.

Arguing with the children
that only want to be near.
Where did he go
I cant find him here.

Where is the laughter
and that wonderful smile.
Id promise him anything
if he would come back for awhile.

My Daddy is lost
and I am in fear
I will never find him
the man I hold so dear.

I love you Daddy
I just want that much to be clear.










[This message has been edited by bluebrdy65 (edited 12-19-2000).]

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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-12-19 08:50 PM


Very nice topic here.  I lost the love I once felt from my father also. Hmmmmm kinda odd how love can change over the years with different circumstances.

Nice read,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-12-19 08:58 PM


Awww this is a great piece--lots of luck with your father-- hugs LOVE ELMO <3
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