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Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2000-12-19 09:29 AM




Far away are you from me,
Yet across the distance I could still hear,
Your words singing high in the winds,
Whispering , calming ...
Like a lustrous lullabye,
Soothing.

You gave me hope among the stars,
A promise with no end in sight.
You gave me a freeway to Love,
A heaven that belongs to you and I.

Across the bridge,
Serenity beholds my world now.
You brought dreams into this reality,
This sea of bliss, in it now I dwell.
My life is just about complete,
Thank you, my love, for all its beauty.


----------------------------------------------------
This is for everyone ... Hoping we will all find that someone who will make us complete ... =)


© Copyright 2000 Regina Ng C. L. - All Rights Reserved
Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-12-19 12:18 PM


Oh that is so sweet  Love can be such a beautiful thing don't ya think
Suzanne

firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-12-19 12:23 PM


What a beautiful picture of love you paint  .. This was wonderful! And I completely agree!

Sheila


firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
3 posted 2000-12-19 12:23 PM


Sorry.. having some trouble with double hitting tonight! LOL  

Sheila



[This message has been edited by firecrakker (edited 12-19-2000).]

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2000-12-19 05:11 PM


Awwwwww Thanks Verve!                    

You gave me hope among the stars,
A promise with no end in sight.
You gave me a freeway to Love,
A heaven that belongs to you and I

Beautiful, I do agree  

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


MysticWonders
Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
5 posted 2000-12-19 09:40 PM


Great poem*S*
Brought a smile thinking about my love that is Miles apart from me  
Danyel




If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :(

Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
6 posted 2000-12-20 01:37 AM



Hi ALL ...

Thank you for your kind replies ...
And yes, Suzanne, I do think that love can be so beautiful and magical when it is here to stay ... =)
Sheila, I am glad that u liked this one.
Mags, U are welcomed. I think we all deserve to be happy ...
Danyel, itz great to know that u can relate to this one ...


~regina

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