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Aching Heart
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Aching Heart |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
My heart is aching Can't you feel my pain etched on words so short and retained How did i let you get so close to me Now nothings left I can't even feel free Oh you captured my heart and you captured my soul Now i am lost and have nowhere to go If i could go back would i change a thing Maybe not for i would still feel the pain Of a love so torn and shattered and bare I can only sit back and just stare At mistakes that were made not only my own and in the making i feel i have grown And as painful as it is at least we have shared your in my heart but it is still stripped and bare |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Suzanne, I know this broken and bare heart, it is so sad, isn't it? I guess we are sharing a similar time. Excellent writing, I can feel the pain. Email if you would like to chat more. Sandra Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today. — James Dean |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
This one i can relate to too ... Such sadness ... This was a great read. Thanks for sharing ... ~verve |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
honest emotion, sad, nice job. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Thank you Catalinamoon but it is an old hurt.I think based more on anger than anything.I have a hard time dealing with anger and that was my way of expressing it. Thank you all for your responses. |
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