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just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-12-14 06:10 PM


A year ago today
I had so much hope for us.
thought soon we'd be together,
thought I'd be the one you'd trust.

A year ago today
I would have done anything for you.
Would have give'n up my life,
so we could be one instead of two.

A year ago today
I thought what we had was real.
I lived on my wishes,
and believed in love and how it makes one feel.

A year ago today
I could see you and me forever.
I could picture our kids,
so cute and clever.

Do you remember
A year ago today?
you feelings and everything promised then
have some how slipped away.

Today is so much different.
Your so far away.
I just hope unlike your feelings for me,
your good memories of us will stay.

The day I turn my back on you
is like saying the day we'll be together.
Do you know when that day is?
That day is...NEVER.

I love you with all my heart:
A year ago, today, forever.
But now I see my chances with you real clear...there
Not a year ago, not today, not ever.




Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might h

© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-12-14 06:19 PM


They say before we pursue a relationship with someone we must first be able to visualize ourselves with that person...and so we must not be able to see that vision for it to end...in our mind and in our heart...James
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-12-14 08:26 PM


So sad, whatever his reasons, your pain, your broken dreams are still real and still hurt.  Good luck and nice piece  
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-12-15 01:00 AM


Awwwww my heart goes out to you! I know the memories are difficult. But hey time does make them better. Not sure when but it really does. You wrote a beautiful piece here.  Full of heart and love.  Great work!

DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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