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0 posted 2000-12-12 04:27 PM



Ashes revealing bones,
To whom shall you condone?

Seeds poisoned by desire,
Is this what you admire?

Swelled by the past,
You’ve seeking help at last?

Future is impend,
Do you not repent?

Forgiveness you seek,
But your sanity you let leak?

Letting it all out,
Isn’t this all about?


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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LM
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1 posted 2000-12-13 07:59 AM


Two thumbs up, man! Great job!
Taqke Care!

Broken_Winged_Angel
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2 posted 2000-12-13 10:56 PM


Wow... Those are some pretty heavy questions.   Good job.  
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