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qtpieelmo
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0 posted 2000-12-12 12:47 PM


FADING !

As I look back to when we 1st started,
I never imagined this day would come.
I feel you slowly fade away,
like leftover snow in the morning sun.
Melting away the rest of my heart.
Crumbling the last of my dreams.
Solid gold now tarnished,
well that's the way it seems.
Teardrops come tumbling down,
sunrise fades to dusk.
Wiping away pieces of you,
copper turns to rust.
I try to catch the trickling sand,
'til our very last day.
I want you to myself forever,
but that's more than you can say.
How can I hold on to nothing,
if you refuse to do the same?
How can I listen to my heart,
when I can't even hear you call out my name?
Why can't we be as strong as the beginning,
when each other was all we would need?
Our love has flurished into a beautiful flower,
so why do I still long for the seed?
If this is how it was meant to be,
then I guess I must let go.
I'll open my hand & release the sand,
as the storm winds begin to blow.
Maybe someday you'll come back to me,
as do leaves in the spring.
Until then I'll be patient,
& see what it may bring!

LOVE ELMO  
<3

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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2000-12-12 01:13 PM


SHHHH--I'm at work--You never saw me--hee hee   LOVE ELMO <3
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-12-14 02:17 PM



Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
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New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-12-14 11:18 PM


Elmo...Well done, VERY well done.  It's sad when you begin to realize that love is fading, and you can do nothing but stand and watch it happen.  You captured that so well here.  Bravo!!  Hardrock
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-12-16 10:54 AM


Awww thanx Hardrock---you're sweet   LOVE ELMO <3
MysticWonders
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since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
5 posted 2000-12-16 06:04 PM


WOW! this blew me away*S*



If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :(

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
6 posted 2000-12-17 09:46 AM


Thanx, I'm glad u liked it, now all I have to do is hope my boyfriend likes it   lol LOVE ELMO <3
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